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My story takes place during 1976 in Venice, California and revolves around 2 teenage boys who love skateboarding. They join a competition and get noticed by a company and are given sponsorship offers. However after a wild drug-induced night, they begin to question what skateboarding truly means to them.

To be honest, I could've wrote this better but I hope yall enjoy it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fOp3reXRwSxDIcBj7zmuxG1YDFF3s6qQP5tvFyDBNKo/edit?usp=sharing

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